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Guest Review: One Wedding, Two Brides by Heidi Betts

Posted August 15, 2018 by Tracy in Reviews | 1 Comment

Guest Review: One Wedding, Two Brides by Heidi BettsReviewer: Tracy
One Wedding, Two Brides (Fairy Tale Bride #1) by Heidi Betts
Series: Fairy Tale Bride #1
Publisher: Entangled: Amara
Publication Date: Judy 23rd 2018
Format: eARC
Point-of-View: Third
Genres: Contemporary Romance
Pages: 263
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three-stars
Series Rating: three-stars

Jilted bride Monica Blair can’t believe it when she wakes up next to a blue-eyed, smooth-talking cowboy in the middle of nowhere and with a ring on her finger. It had sounded like a great plan at the time. Get married, get revenge, and get her money back. So why is she cleaning out stables and trying to keep her hands off the hot cowboy helping her?

Ryder Nash would have bet his best Stetson that you’d never see him walk down the aisle. But when the city girl with pink-streaked hair and a frog tattoo hatches a plan to expose the conman who married his sister, no idea is too crazy. And even though Monica might be the worst rancher’s wife he’s ever seen, he can’t stop thinking about the wedding night they never had.

What was supposed to be a temporary marriage for revenge is starting to feel a little too real...

Monica is devastated when she opens her Chicago paper and reads a wedding announcement for her fiancé, Matt.  But she’s not the bride in the announcement!  She hops on a plane and while she knows that she won’t make it to stop the wedding, she knows that she has to do something to let Matt know that she found out about the deception.  While on the way to Nevada she ends up getting drunk and crashes the reception and starts spouting off.  She’s hauled out by the bride’s brother, Ryder.

Monica tells Ryder that she needs to get back at Matt and let him know the huge mistake he made by marrying someone else.  The only way, according to her drunken mind, to do that is to get married as well. This will supposedly infuriate Matt because she’ll be the perfect wife.  (Yeah, it makes no sense to me either.)  She says she’ll pay Ryder $50,000 to marry her – a marriage of convenience, of course – and then they’ll get it annulled when she feels Matt has been bested (as he’s so competitive).  So, Ryder’s farm is failing and he needs money, desperately, so while he knows that marrying Monica isn’t smart he needs that money.

The next morning Monica wakes up and can’t remember anything.  She’s horrified that she married this man she didn’t know and then lets him know that she doesn’t have $50,000 because Matt stole it from her before he married Ryder’s sister. Ryder is shocked but determined to get the money back from Matt, so they decide to stay married and work together.

While I enjoyed this story at times, there were plenty of parts that annoyed me.  Ryder was one of them.  He was very concerned for his farm, I get that, but it made him seem pretty self-centered in the way he acted.  He went along with Monica’s schemes but never graciously.  Monica and I had a love/hate relationship as well.  I thought she was an idiot at the beginning, but she made up for it by the end of the book.

This is intended to be an overall light-hearted book and that’s what it is – there’s not a lot of depth.  It was cute and funny at times so that kind of made up for the parts where I found myself rolling my eyes.

Rating: 3 out of 5

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Guest Review: The Bite Before Christmas by Heidi Betts

Posted November 15, 2010 by Book Binge Guest Blogger in Reviews | 1 Comment

Genres: Anthologies (multiple authors), Paranormal Romance

Mary‘s review of The Bite Before Christmas by Heidi Betts.

In Heidi Betts’s collection of holiday novellas, vampires turn to Angelina Bertolli—vampire matchmaker extraordinaire—to help them find that special someone to curl up with under the mistletoe…

“All I Vant For Christmas”

Connor loves trimming the Christmas tree, baking gingerbread cookies, and hanging the mistletoe. But his vampire siblings won’t help. His friend Angelina sends party planner Jillian to the rescue. But when Jillian, who’s mortal, discovers she’s decking the halls for a family of vampires, will she run—or will Connor have a beautiful woman to share the holidays with?

Connor just wants a peaceful, happy holiday but his younger siblings, who also happen to be vampires—rebellious, teenaged vampires—want nothing to do with their stick-in-the-mud brother’s Christmas dreams. At wit’s end, Connor hires Jillian to create the holiday of his dreams. It’s instant lust, at least on his part, and he sets out to win her over. He even goes as far as requiring she live at his mansion while she decorates. Jillian’s a little more reluctant. He’s a vampire, for goodness’ sake. What if he loses control and bites her? But his patience and his totally smokin’ bod bring her around.

Heidi Betts can tell a great story in a short format. Her characters in this novella are funny and endearing. Connor tries so hard to make a home for his siblings, who go out of their way to tick him off with their piercings, tattoos, and rude behavior. And Jillian comes in, saves the day, and charms them all. A perfect little romance.

Rating for this novella: 5 out of 5

“A Vampire in Her Stocking”
When Vivian learns that her secret crush Nick is terminally ill, she’s heartbroken. Confiding in Angelina, Vivian refuses to turn Nick into a vampire. Deciding to play Santa, Angelina changes Nick and leaves him wrapped in a red bow on Vivian’s doorstep…

Vampire Vivian has had the hots for her boss but never acted on it. But then he tells her he’s dying. She throws herself at him, and they wind up making passionate love in his office. Then he takes her home, and she doesn’t expect to see him ever again, given that he’s dying and all. So, imagine her surprise and horror when she finds him on her couch, a newly-changed vampire.

He’s pretty much a jerk about it all, which I could have forgiven considering he had no choice in the matter and now might live for a millennium. But, despite his protests that he doesn’t like Vivian like that, he dives back into bed with her before he ducks out on her. I think this story might have worked better as a full-length novel. Since it was so short, I didn’t really have a chance to get to know the characters or their motivations and, as a result, I wasn’t a fan of either of them. Nick was a self-absorbed jerk (yes, he was dying and then he wasn’t but I just didn’t like him) and Vivian seemed pretty weak-willed. Maybe if I could have spent more time with the two of them, I would have liked them better.

Rating for this novella: 2.75 out of 5

“It’s A Wonderful Bite”
Although Angelina is happy with her boyfriend Sergio, she’s ready for a commitment. After drinking eggnog and watching It’s a Wonderful Life on Christmas Eve, Angelina falls into a dream where she is mortal and Sergio isn’t interested in her. Talk about the nightmare before Christmas! But Santa must have checked his list twice because this Christmas Angelina’s wishes are coming true…

Angelina’s been a key player in the past two novellas and finally gets her shot. She’s been in a relationship with her honey for ages but they haven’t taken it to the next level—marriage. And she wants to be married to Sergio, especially after she sees her friends Connor and Vivian so happy in their relationships.

I really liked the It’s a Wonderful Life twist to this story. Angelina, who likes the good things in life, is thrust into the role of an underpaid, human cop with Sergio as her partner and her love. In this alternate reality, Sergio is married…just not to her. Angelina’s a great character—a strong person who knows what she wants and isn’t afraid to go out there and get it. When she’s dropped into this nightmare, she steps up and takes care of business. A great happily-ever-after.

Rating for this novella: 4.5 out of 5.

Overall rating for the collection: 4 out of 5.

This book is available from Brava. You can buy it here or here in e-format.


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Review: Loves Me, Loves Me Knot by Heidi Betts

Posted September 18, 2009 by Casee in Reviews | 9 Comments

Casee‘s review of Loves Me, Loves Me Knot (Chicks with Sticks, Book 2) by Heidi Betts.

Jenna Langan knows what she wants, and as she tells her best friends after their weekly knitting group, she doesn’t need a man to give it to her…only a few of his best swimmers. And just because her marriage to undercover vice cop Gage Marshall ended badly doesn’t mean he can’t still give her the baby she’s always wanted. In fact, she’s willing to bet a couple of her favorite hand-knit boas that she can tie him up in knots he’ll definitely enjoy…

An unexpected seduction is one thing, but stud service? No, thank you. Gage had his reasons for pulling the plug on his happily ever after with Jenna, and nothing that’s happened since their divorce has changed his mind. That is, until Jenna got it into her head to tie him up and drag him down. Now he has no choice but to stick around until he knows for sure if his ex-wife is pregnant. But the more time he spends with Jenna, the more his resolve begins to unravel…

I HATED THIS BOOK.

After Tangled Up in Love, I was really looking forward to this book. I’m a sucker for reunion stories. This was not a reunion book. It was more like a “I want to get pregnant and am going to rape you to get your sperm” book.

That’s right, Jenna rapes Gage. There’s nothing else to call it. She drugged him specifically so she could tie him up and have sex with him. For the sole purpose of getting her pregnant. She knew how Gage felt about kids; he doesn’t want them. It’s the reason they got divorced. Yet her and her friends concoct this plan for Jenna to get what she wants. And why not get it from Gage? She deserves it.

Can you see where I’m going with this?

I wanted to stop reading the book about 40 or so pages in. I skipped to the back and read the last few pages. Then I flipped through it. The only reason I went back and sort of skimmed it was b/c of what was setup for the next book.

There was nothing good about Gage and Jenna’s relationship. Sure, Gage was a total ass changing his mind about kids after they had already gotten married. If Jenna was a little more attentive, she would have associated it with Gage’s job. I suppose she can be excused b/c she was so heartbroken. But nothing excuses what she did to try to get pregnant.

I just couldn’t get past that part.

1 out of 5.

This book is available from St. Martin’s Press. You can buy it here.

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Book Watch: Loves Me, Loves Me Knot by Heidi Betts.

Posted July 29, 2009 by Rowena in Promotions | 2 Comments

Woo hoo, another book to look forward to! Both Casee and I have reviewed the first book in the series.

THIS IS KNOW YOUR AVERAGE LOVE STORY

Jenna Langan knows what she wants, and as she tells her best friends after their weekly knitting group, she doesn’t need a man to give it to her…only a few of his best swimmers. And just because her marriage to undercover vice cop Gage Marshall ended badly doesn’t mean he can’t still give her the baby she’s always wanted. In fact, she’s willing to bet a couple of her favorite hand-knit boas that she can tie him up in knots he’ll definitely enjoy…

BUT TRUE LOVE IS MORE THAN JUST SKEIN DEEP

An unexpected seduction is one thing, but stud service? No, thank you. Gage had his reasons for pulling the plug on his happily ever after with Jenna, and nothing that’s happened since their divorce has changed his mind. That is, until Jenna got it into her head to tie him up and drag him down. Now he has no choice but to stick around until he knows for sure if his ex-wife is pregnant. But the more time he spends with Jenna, the more his resolve begins to unravel…

Ooh, I can’t wait! Another one to keep your eyes out on. This book comes out on August 4, 2009 so that’s in just a few days! Woot! If you haven’t already, be sure to check out the first book in this series, Tangled Up in Love. Very cute! Mark your calendars everyone, a new Heidi Betts is coming out!

So who’s excited with me about this book? And who’s already got their book pre-ordered?

This book is available from St. Martin’s Press. You can pre-order it here.


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Review and Giveaway: Real Men Last All Night by Lori Foster, Lora Leigh, Cheyenne McCray, and Heidi Betts

Posted July 1, 2009 by Casee in Reviews | 54 Comments


Casee‘s review of Real Men Last All Night by Lori Foster, Lora Leigh, Cheyenne McCray, and Heidi Betts.

Luring Lucy by Lori Foster
All Lucy was looking for when she went to her vacation home was in innocent fling to quell the yearning she had felt since her husband died four years ago. She never expected her longtime friend Bram to lure her into a love affair so hot.

As I was reading this first story in the anthology, I had a major case of déjà vu. I could have sworn that I had read a book by Lori Foster about someone named Lucy years ago. I blamed it on the pain pills and continued. I didn’t get much farther before I realized that I HAD read it before and that Luring Lucy is in fact a re-print. That annoys me. Especially when the back of the books says “In this hot new collection”. Notice the word new? I almost decided not to continue, but I really like the other three authors.

In Luring Lucy (first published in the Hot and Bothered anthology), Lucy has returned to the beach house where she caught her husband cheating. At 39, Lucy is determined to get her life back; to start she’s going to have a hot affair with her lawn boy. That’s before Bram shows up and throws her plans all to hell.

Bram has been in love with Lucy since the moment he met her. When she married his best friend, David, he stepped aside, never revealing his true feelings. When he learns that she’s on a mission to have an affair, he races to the beach house to inform her that any affair she’s going to have is going to be with him.

My annoyance about the whole reprint thing aside, I really liked this book.

4.25 out of 5.

Cooper’s Fall by Lora Leigh
Former ranger turned bar owner Ethan Cooper never expected to get an eyeful of prim Miss Sarah Fox from his attic window one hot summer afternoon. But now his blood is on fire for the delicious little minx.

Cooper’s Fall begins in typical LL fashion. Ethan Cooper is in his attic (it was never really revealed why he’s in the attic) and see’s his hot next door neighbor, naked and touching herself down by her pool. When he sees some interesting body piercings she has, Cooper starts thinking that “Miss” Sarah may not be the good girl she portrays herself to be.

Sarah Fox moved into a small town hoping to fit in. After a tragedy in her past, all Sarah wants is peace and a little happiness. She thinks she can find it the small Texas town she moved to. After two years of living there, Sarah has almost no friends. When she goes to the bar, she gets hustled out like she’s someone’s kid sister. She’s enraged when she finds out that Ethan Cooper is behind her getting snubbed. She decides that the town is not for her, but before she leaves, she’s going to give him a piece of her mind.

Cooper felt protective of Sarah from the moment she came into town. He put the word out that she wasn’t a conquest for any of the men that were only looking for that. When she confronts him, he realizes that his initial order has gotten way out of hand.

Sarah was a good heroine. Cooper was one of those heroes that had to have a heroine that would stand up to him. Sarah would take any of his crap. I also appreciated how she made no bones about her feelings for him.

4 out of 5.

The Edge of Sin by Cheyenne McCray
Zane Steele lives a life of extraordinary danger as a government agent and has never let anyone get too close. Then he sees the one woman who changes his life forever.

When Zane first see’s Willow, he’s instantly attracted to her. Though he has no plans to approach her, he can’t keep his eyes off her. What he doesn’t realize at first is that she has noticed him too. He also learns what a force Willow can be.

On the day they meet, Zane and Willow have sex in a restaurant they’re at for their first date. It sounds totally sleazy, but it was hot. They just had this instant attraction to each other that they can’t deny.

As they get closer, Zane continues to ignore the problem at hand. As a top-secret government agent, anyone close to him can be a target by people like the mafia, terrorists, etc. He doesn’t want Willow to get hurt b/c of him, so he’s kind of stuck. On one hand, he doesn’t want her hurt. On the other hand, he doesn’t want to let her go.

I enjoyed this story. I really liked Willow at first, but as the book went on, I found myself thinking “Seriously?”. I mean really, who acts like she does? And it wasn’t the sex in the restaurant that did it either. It was any number of other things. It just seemed that a girl like Willow wouldn’t have lasted long in the world. She seemed too good to be true.

3.5 out of 5.

Wanted: A Real Man by Heidi Betts
Claire left her high school sweetheart Linc, in search of a better life. Ten years later she needs his help as a U.S. Marshal to find her missing daughter…Linc’s daughter. Reeling with the knowledge of a daughter he’s never known, Linc sets out to claim what’s his.

This is my favorite story in the whole book. I love reunion stories; I can take or leave secret baby stories. In this novella, I had both. And they worked very well together.

Claire left her small Pennsylvania town when she was 18, determined to not fall in the footsteps of everyone else in town. The hardest think she ever did was leave Linc, the boy she loves and always thought she would marry. She just doesn’t want to restrict herself to small town life.

What she didn’t know when she left was that she was pregnant with Linc’s baby. I never really did understand why she didn’t go back. She hadn’t been in California for very long before she realized she was pregnant. Instead, she married some guy who said he would take care of her. That was the only part that I didn’t really get.

When Claire decides to divorce her husband after 10 years, he takes her daughter and leaves town. His family is uber powerful, so Claire is convinced that they’re going to falsify DNA documents so Jonathan can get permanent custody of Sara. Scared and worried, Claire tracks Linc down who is now a US Marshal.

Linc has never forgiven Claire for leaving him the way she did. When she comes and tells him that he has a daughter, he is floored. And furious. He didn’t think there was any other way Claire could betray him, but he finds out there is. When she tells him what’s going on, he agrees to help her, albeit unwillingly.

Linc and Claire have always had an undeniable connection. When they travel back to San Francisco, they can’t ignore the pull. I loved the relationship between these two. You could just tell that no matter what happened, they were meant to be together. I loved it.

4.5 out of 5.

Overall, I would have to say 4 out of 5.

This book is available from St. Martin’s Press. You can buy it here.

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