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Excerpt: Money, Honey by Susan Sey

Posted July 13, 2010 by Holly in Promotions | 4 Comments

Here’s a little chunk of Money, Honey, the aftermath of a break-in at Liz’s house:

Liz leaned against the doorjamb of the kitchen and watched Patrick putter in her kitchen. The guy moved with such a fluid, masculine grace that he made putting on a pot of coffee look like some kind of high-class performance art.

“Anything missing?” he asked without turning to her. She jumped guiltily, lost in the poetry of watching him, then pulled herself together.

“No. Some tampering with the alarm system, of course, and a pro tossed the place, but nothing’s missing.” She moved into the room, sank onto a stool at the high counter that constituted the eat-in portion of the kitchen.

He poured water into the top of the coffee machine with a steady, methodical flow. “This kind of thing happen often?”

“Nope. I’ve been with the Bureau eight years now and this is a first.” He hadn’t yet met her eyes, but Liz folded her arms on the counter and leaned forward to give his back a searching look. She wished he would look at her, damn it. She wanted to see his eyes. “Doesn’t surprise me, though.”

“Why’s that?” he asked as the first fragrant drips of coffee sizzled into the carafe.

“Don’t screw with me on this, Patrick,” she said wearily. God, she was sick of pretending. Villanueva had been inside her house, for God’s sake. She knew it, and Patrick most likely did, too. The difference was she was under orders to keep her secrets. He wasn’t. “First your sister’s place gets broken into, then mine. Not a robbery, though, just a search. A thorough, methodical, professional search. Both occur in the two weeks since you got here, both victims are known to be your relatives or acquaintances.”

He still hadn’t looked at her, and she desperately wanted him to. If he looked at her, maybe she could see what he was thinking. What this meant to him. What she meant to him.

“As of this moment, I’m officially done politely accepting lame excuses about paparazzi. Somebody followed you to Grief Creek, Patrick, and the only questions I have are who and why.”

He spread his hands on either side of the coffee machine, bowed his head and leaned in. Talk to me, she pleaded silently. Just trust me with this. Tell me what’s going on and I can help you. She was practically leaning over the counter with the effort to reach him on some level, but when he finally turned to her, there was such rage twisting his face that she jerked abruptly back.

“Why do you do this?” he snarled, with nothing like his usual upper-crust drawl. This was fury, raw and primitive, and it hammered at Liz along with a vicious slap of self-disgust. God, she thought, there she went again, trying to pull thorns out of lions’ paws. As if she didn’t know by now to steer clear of wounded predators.

“Do what?” she asked, careful to keep her voice cool and neutral.

“This job.” He spat the word like it was toxic, and a fresh wave of unwelcome hurt rolled through her at his contempt for the work that meant everything to her. “For Christ’s sake, Liz, there could have been a killer in here tonight. And you just traipse right in with your high heels and your gorgeous dress and your gun and all that beautiful, fragile skin. Skin that isn’t bulletproof, no matter what Quantico’s told you. Why the hell do you do it?”

“You’re concerned about my job? Being too dangerous?” She stared at him in wonder. “Remember the time Lenny Andrusco tried to take me apart like a Barbie doll? Guy had to weigh a good three bells. Charged like a bull once he finally figured out we were wired.”

Patrick nodded tightly. “I remember, Liz.”

“Then you should also remember how you stepped aside while I took his ass down.” She leaned in, gave him a good, hard stare. “You weren’t overly concerned about the dangers of my job then. So why now?”

He shoved an impatient hand through all that rumpled black hair. “Andrusco was about as bright as your average second grader, Liz. He was big and pissed but he wasn’t dangerous. This is different. This is—” He broke off, shook his head.

“This is what?” Liz asked softly. “Tell me what this is, Patrick.” Please.

He shook his head. “You should have stayed on the porch.”

Disappointment pooled heavy in the chest, but Liz folded her arms and cocked a hip. “Some jerk breaks into my house and I should let you kick his ass?”

Yes.”

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 Susan is offering free copies of Money, Honey to 5 lucky winners! If you’re interested in winning a copy check out the details here.

This book is available from Berkley Sensation. You can buy it here or here in e-format.


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Guest Author: Susan Sey – Living the Dream

Posted July 13, 2010 by Holly in Giveaways, Promotions | 61 Comments

Welcome to the Money, Honey Blog tour, in which author Susan Sey celebrates the July 6 release of her debut novel by counting down the Top Ten Most Common Reactions an ill-groomed stay at home mom receives when confessing her secret career as a romance novelist.
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Hello, Book Bingers! Thanks so much for helping me celebrate the launch of my debut novel, Money, Honey. Today we’ll be talking about Response #5 on my list: The dreaded awkward silence.

(If you’re all aflutter to know what the other nine responses are, check out http://www.susansey.com/pages.php?ID=5)

Now this is a toughie. Bad enough now that I’m published but way worse before I sold. It gives a dream legitimacy if somebody’s paying you to pursue it, even modestly. But for five long years, I was both unpublished and unagented. I was unemployed, too, unless you count producing and chasing children, and dealing with the laundry that ensues. Which keeps a girl pretty busy, actually. But unagented, unpublished AND unemployed? It’s the conversational kiss of death.Here’s how it would usually go:

Well-meaning stranger: “So, what do you do?”
Me: “Oh, I stay home with my kids.”
WMS: “Wow, good for you. That’s so great. I could never be a stay at home mom. I’d go nuts.”
Me: “Yeah, it can get a little crazy.”
WMS: “Seriously. I mean, I love my kids but if I didn’t get out of the house I’d lose it. I mean, how much conversation can you have with a two year old, right? When it comes to brain power, you got to use it or lose it, you know?”
Me, smiling: “Oh, I know.”
WMS, suspecting they’ve insulted me but in too deep now to back out: “Um, so what else do you? I mean, you must do something for yourself, right? Something that uses your…” This is where they want to say brain but catch themselves in time to go with… “—education?”
Me, deciding not to mention the notion that raising children is enough to keep a smarter woman than I busy 24/7 and then some: “I write novels during naptime.”
WMS, brightening: “Really? That’s great! What kind?”
Me: “Romance.”
WMS, crestfallen: “That’s..well, hey, good for you! Where can I buy your books?”
Me: “Nowhere. I’m unpublished.”
WMS, realizing this conversation is now unsalvageable: “Oh.”
Awkward silence ensues.

You can see why I started keeping my ambitions to myself. But all that changed a few years back when my husband & I flew out to Portland OR to visit his best friend from grad school. Now I didn’t know this friend very well, and knew his wife—a scary-smart & uber-accomplished corporate lawyer—even less. One day we’re walking along the beach & the dreaded question comes up: “So Susan,” Mrs. Accomplished asks me. “What do you do for yourself to stay sane while you’re home with the kids?”

Now my husband has always been out & proud about my ambitions to write romance, to the point that he’d been threatening to tell people if I didn’t. So when The Question presented itself, one glance told me he was ready to make good on that promise. I indulged in some mental cursing & a truly evil glare (which bounced right off, as usual) and fessed up. “I write romance novels, actually.”

The silence was long & deafening. Mortification ensued. I couldn’t even look at her, this woman I’d been starting to really, really like.

Then she said, in tones of enthusiastic wonder, “Really? Because I’ve been writing a pirate novel for YEARS.”

Fast forward to 2008. Here’s a picture of us—me and The Amazing Kirsten Scott, who’s become my dear friend, invaluable critique partner & fellow Romance Bandit–celebrating Money, Honey’s Golden Heart win. If Inara hadn’t sold her YA series to Hyperion earlier in the year, I have no doubt she’d be holding a matching pendant. I still want her to finish that darn pirate novel but the jump to YA seems to have treated her well.

I trust her opinion without reservation, so the fact that she loves Money, Honey’s Patrick with a fervor second only to my own makes me think maybe he really is as awesome as I think he is.

Thanks for coming out today to play! So now you know all about my improbable little dream of being a romance novelist. What about you? Are you harboring any unlikely ambitions? Are you a CPA who longs to sing opera? A stay at home mom moonlighting as a disc jockey or backup singer? Are you pursuing the dream, or just enjoying the fantasy? Either way, I want to hear about it. Five lucky commenters will receive a free copy of Money, Honey!

Some years back, Golden Heart Award Winner Susan Sey gave up the glamorous world of software training to pursue a high powered career in diaper changing. Two children and millions of diapers later, she decided to branch out and started writing novels during nap time. The kids eventually gave up their naps, so now she writes when she’s supposed to be doing the laundry. She currently resides in St. Paul, MN, with her wonderful husband, their charming children and a very tall pile of dirty clothes.

Visit Susan on her website or at her blog

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Haven’t we all had a conversation like that at one time or another? I can totally relate. Not about the writing part, but the awkwardness of trying to explain to someone who’s never going to understand.

Thanks Susan!

Alright folks, you heard her. Leave a comment here answering Susan’s question from above and you’ll be entered to win one of five (5!) copies of Money, Honey! Contest ends Tuesday July 20, 2010 @ 11:59p.m.


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Review: Money, Honey by Susan Sey

Posted July 13, 2010 by Holly in Reviews | 0 Comments

Publisher: Berkley, PenguinGenres: Romantic Suspense

Holly‘s review of Money, Honey by Susan Sey

WHEN A LAWMAKER…

FBI Agent Elizabeth Brynn has dedicated her life to her job, having earned her position through hard work and a firm belief in law and order. She played strictly by the book until she recruited a notorious jewel thief as an informant-a professional criminal who used his wicked ways to tempt her into something more personal…

BETS ON A HEARTBREAKER…

Patrick O’Connor assisted the Feds for three years before going legit. Now a successful crime novelist, he wheels and deals his way around Hollywood, getting anything and everything he desires-except a certain federal agent who remained immune to his charms…

THERE’S MORE AT STAKE THAN JUST THE MONEY, HONEY.

Cop and robber are unexpectedly reunited when Patrick agrees to go undercover to help bust a counterfeiter-but his true motive is to get Liz under the covers, and she’s not sure she can keep her hands to herself this time….

This is Susan Sey’s debut novel. As a contemporary romance, this really hits the mark. The dialogue is witty, the main characters sexy and the sexual tension hot enough to steam. 

Six years ago Patrick O’Connor was a jewel thief at the top of his game, but he gave himself up to save his little sister. For three years he did time, in the form of playing weasel for FBI Agent Liz Brynn. Then he left Mara, his baby sister, and Liz behind. Three years later he’s a successful author and screenwriter, and he turns back up, unexpected. Ostensibly to help his baby sister catch a counterfeiter, who’s been running money through her casino. But he has a hidden agenda, only part of which is getting Liz naked and in his bed.

Agent Liz Brynn doesn’t trust Patrick any farther than she can throw him, but that doesn’t stop her from wanting him. He’s always managed to get under her skin, and things haven’t changed in the three years since she last saw him. She’s suspicious of his motives, but she’s willing to use him if it means catching the counterfeiter. Especially if it means keeping him close so she can figure out what he’s been hiding. Of course that makes fighting her attraction even harder, but a girls gotta do what a girls gotta do.

Liz Brynn is the one woman Patrick has never had, so she’s the one he’s totally fixated on. He doesn’t try to deny it, or pretend it’s something else. He just does his best to make sure Liz doesn’t find out. He doesn’t want anyone to find out, come to that. He knows nothing good can come of loving others, or letting them love him. He’s good at keeping people, his sister and her family, Liz, etc, at arms length. It’s obvious to the reader right from the beginning that he isn’t as detached as he’d like to believe. But it takes him a little longer to figure it out. It was fun watching him get there.

Liz puts the badge first, always, in everything. But she has a hard time putting it first when it comes to Patrick. The attraction sizzling between them keeps blurring the lines for her. Patrick didn’t let her get away with pushing him away, or hiding behind her badge. It was nice to see her concede the point when Patrick called her on something. Instead of getting defensive and acting like the abused party, she acknowledged when he was right about her.

Unfortunately, as a Romantic Suspense, this really didn’t work at all. The suspense plot was weak, the villain one dimensional and the procedure aspects full of holes. I tried setting that aside, since the suspense was very light and the focus on the romance, but there was too much to overlook. I tried to take this in the vein of Tara Janzen’s Steele Street series, but it was a stretch.

I also felt like I missed a book somewhere along the way. A lot of Patrick’s past, especially with the FBI, is alluded to in a way that made me think I’d missed part of the story. Since this is a debut, I know that isn’t the case, but it’s my hope that we’ll be given better insight in later books.  There also seems to be quite a bit of backstory with Patrick’s sister and her husband I hope to see explored later.

The good news is that the romance made up for what the suspense lacked. I was able to set aside disbelief, or flat out ignore things when I couldn’t, enough to enjoy certain aspects of the story.

Though the suspense didn’t work, this was still a steamy, sexy read. I look forward to seeing where Sey goes in the future.

3 out of 5

This book is available from Berkley Sensation. You can buy it here or here in e-format.


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