Day: October 1, 2010

Excerpts: Sloane Hall by Libby Sternberg

Posted October 1, 2010 by Holly in Promotions | 0 Comments

TWO BRIEF EXCERPTS FROM SLOANE HALL

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In this scene, John recalls the incident that led to being kicked out of his lodgings before the novel begins:

I’d been in a fight that morning with Clyde, one of the other boys rooming at Jake’s Coach Service and Tip Top Garage. The little shit had left a wrench out and I’d tripped over it. Then the runt wouldn’t pick up the tool when I told him to. They never heeded, the little rats. So I’d made him heed. I’d punched him. Thirty seconds into the fight and I had begun to see him not as Clyde but as Brice Clement from the Canfield Home for Wayward Boys, as evil incarnate, as something the world was better rid of. I’d been an avenging angel in the City of the Queen of Angels. Stay out of my way. I was doing God’s work.

Jake, the owner of the garage and rooming house, hadn’t seen it that way. He’d told me I didn’t fit in and suggested I find another place to live.


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In this scene, Pauline Sloane hosts a grand party at her Hollywood estate to celebrate the start of her first talking picture shoot. She insists John come into the party and even dance with her:

All right. If this is what she wanted…

I moved my body closer to hers, digging my fingers into her tender waist and up until the edges of my hand felt the underside of her breast. She did not pull away. I nudged the hair away from her face and kissed her cheek. She didn’t stop me. I placed my head next to hers and breathed into her ear profanities about what I could do if she were a willing partner, things the other boys had talked about, and what I expected her to do for me. She did not recoil.

And then the joke turned sour. The room, it swirled, it danced, it rotated so that my feet no longer had to move. The things I’d said—I wanted them. They were no joke—I really wanted them! I wanted them more than anything in the world. Give them to me!

Desire swamped me, pushing me under until I could barely breathe. I was a drowning man, gasping for air and finding only the waves of longing that broke over my body, cresting and falling with my thudding heartbeat and ragged breaths. I wanted to…I had to…Please, let me…The warmth of her body penetrated to my own, her scent filled my nostrils, strands of hair brushed my cheek.

“I…” Please, please, let me…

“I…love you.”

Had I shouted it? Whispered it? Had I said it at all? I shook my head.

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Guest Author: Libby Sternberg – Rewriting Jane Eyre

Posted October 1, 2010 by Holly in Giveaways, Promotions | 18 Comments

 Today author Libby Sternberg is here to talk about Sloane Hall, her Old-Hollywood retelling of Charlotte Bronte’s class, Jane Eyre.


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In 1920s Hollywood, young John Doyle learns the craft of cinematography when a stupid mistake costs him his job. On a tip, he heads to Sloane Hall, the estate of a famous silent screen actress, Pauline Sloane, where he lands a position as chauffeur. Sloane Hall first offers him peace as he enjoys the bounty of the luxurious home, then unrest as its beautiful namesake returns and starts preparing for her first talking picture. Despite his best efforts to resist, John falls hopelessly in love with his employer. His future brightens, however, when she appears to return his affection, leading to plans for a secret wedding—until other awful secrets intrude, leading to heartbreak and separation. A story of obsession and forgiveness, Libby Sternberg’s Sloane Hall was inspired by Charlotte Bronte’s Jane Eyre.

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Although my book, Sloane Hall, is inspired by Jane Eyre, I made some substantial changes to the story so that fans of the original would be able to experience this classic tale anew, as if they’d never encountered it before. I adore Jane Eyre, and my goal in writing a book based on it was to experience all its deliciously emotional moments again.

I realized, however, that once you’ve experienced those emotional moments, they no longer surprise. So I really had to think through how to make Sloane Hall fresh while still triggering those same reader reactions for Jane fans.

I changed the time and place to 1929 Hollywood. But the biggest change I made was shifting the genders of the characters. In this way, I hoped readers would come to the story not really knowing what to expect.

In Sloane Hall, John Doyle is the protagonist who tells the story, a lowly worker at a great starlet’s estate who falls in love with his beautiful employer. She is the Rochester character in the book, but, unlike in the original, she is not much older than John.

Despite this huge shift, John, in my first versions of the book, was very much like Jane–gentle, intelligent, plain, forthright and from a hard background.

As I thought through how to make the story feel new, though, I realized that John needed to be someone other than just a male version of Jane. He needed to be…himself. I asked myself this question–how would a guy, who shares Jane’s frankness and unvarnished view of herself and the world, react to similar situations that Jane faced?

My answer was….he’d probably come out swinging. He’d be a fighter, someone who inwardly and outwardly raged against the injustices he saw in the world and the injustices done to him. This would be a constant battle for him, something that lands him in trouble even before the novel begins when he loses his lodgings due to a fistfight with one of the other boys at a boarding house.


This new John might be as plain and eager and–deep down–as loving as Jane. But he is haunted by demons he has to conquer by story’s end in order to find happiness. He will have to learn how to forgive, something that came more easily to Jane. This new John set the tone for the emotional journey throughout the story.

What fun it was to write him, once I’d figured out who he really was! This one change set in motion other shifts in the story that allowed it to be a truly new tale, rather than just a revamping of Bronte’s wonderful novel. With this different approach, I believed I was on track to creating the reading experience I’d envisioned at the outset, one where readers of the original book would find themselves “strangers in a strange land,” meeting these characters and circumstances as if they’d never encountered them before.

If you buy the book, I hope you enjoy it, whether you’re a Jane Eyre fan or have never read the original. If you comment on this post within the next 24 hours, you’ll be eligible to be chosen in a random drawing for a free copy of my novel.

For more on Sloane Hall, Jane Eyre, and old Hollywood, please visit my blog at www.LibbysBooks.wordpress.com! My website is www.LibbysBooks.com. At both sites, you can read the first two chapters for free. Friend me on Facebook at Libby Sternberg. And do let me know what you think of the book by emailing me at Libby488 (at) yahoo (dot) com.

Libby Malin Sternberg was born and raised in Baltimore, Maryland and is still in love with the city of crabcakes, steamy summers, and ethnic neighborhoods. (What’s not to love about a city that names its football team after an Edgar Allan Poe character?) 
For many years, she and her family lived in Vermont, where she worked as an education reform advocate, contributed occasional commentaries to Vermont Public Radio and was a member of the Vermont Commission on Women.
She is married, with three children, and now resides in Lancaster, Pennsylvania.

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Libby is offering a free copy of Sloane Hall to one of our readers. Leave a comment here for a chance to win. Contest ends Oct 4, 2010 at 11:59 p.m.

This book is available from Five Star. You can buy it here.


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Review and Book Giveaway: Hard to Hold by Julie Leto

Posted October 1, 2010 by Tracy in Reviews | 13 Comments

New York lobbyist Michael Davoli feels like he’s been sucker punched when he meets Anne Miller at a concert. When fate leads him to move into same Albany apartment building where Anne lives, Michael falls hard. After all, Anne’s hot, his dog likes her, and she’s catnip to the senses after she picks a lock faster than Sydney Bristow can disarm a nuke.

Always fiercely independent, Anne’s crackerjack reporting skills and keen intellect are no match for the chemical reaction she has to this man with electric blue eyes. But while Mike effortlessly holds her with his gaze, he withholds the embrace she longs for. Why is he so distant? Has Anne misread his signals? When he finally confesses that he suffers from a neurological disorder that he’s learned to disguise from others but could keep him from ever holding her through the night—she makes a choice that changes the rest of her life.

Anne isn’t about to let anything like Tourette’s Syndrome keep her from the man of her dreams. But Mike has a second secret. Will this secret be the one that even a grand passion cannot survive?
When Michael and Anne meet they have an instant connection. Although Anne would liked to talk more to Michael he leaves abruptly. When Anne bumps into Michael a few months later, when he’s actually moving into her apartment building, she thinks that it’s more than good news. But still Michael seems to be a little standoffish. They seem to have a spark of some sort whenever they meet so Anne’s confused and isn’t sure what to think. She finally decides to invite Michael to her place for dinner and their relationship takes off from there.
But Michael’s scared. He normally becomes friends with a woman first and gets to know her in a group setting prior to starting a one on one relationship. That’s not how it is with Anne and it’s thrown him for a loop. When Anne leaves on a trip that was planned before she met Michael things aren’t what she expected when she returns. Michael’s decided that they need to take the relationship slower and just be friends first – but that’s not gonna work for Anne who’s always been the friend. For her it’s all or nothing.
This was a sweet romance of two people that seemed destined for each other from day 1,but life seemed to be dragging them down. The pair had a rocky start to their relationship but worked it out to the point that they were both more than happy. Anne’s job and later the lack thereof, Michael’s Tourette’s, which really wasn’t an issue for Anne, and life in general tried to break them up as well. Through love, trust and faith they stayed together and their relationship thrived.
Hard to Hold is a very sweet book and one I very much enjoyed reading.
Rating: 4 out of 5
I also have one copy of Hard to Hold to give away to one lucky winner (US/Canada only, No PO Boxes). Just leave a comment on this post by 11:59pm (pacific) on October 8, 2010 and I’ll announce the winner on Saturday, October 9. 
For more info on the True Vows book tour go here.


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Guest Review: Sloane Hall by Libby Sternberg

Posted October 1, 2010 by Book Binge Guest Blogger in Reviews | 1 Comment


Judith‘s review of Sloane Hall by Libby Sternberg.

In 1920s Hollywood, young John Doyle learns the craft of cinematography when a stupid mistake costs him his job. On a tip, he heads to Sloane Hall, the estate of a famous silent screen actress, Pauline Sloane, where he lands a position as chauffeur. Sloane Hall first offers him peace as he enjoys the bounty of the luxurious home, then unrest as its beautiful namesake returns and starts preparing for her first talking picture. Despite his best efforts to resist, John falls hopelessly in love with his employer. His future brightens, however, when she appears to return his affection, leading to plans for a secret wedding—until other awful secrets intrude, leading to heartbreak and separation. A story of obsession and forgiveness, Libby Sternberg’s Sloane Hall was inspired by Charlotte Bronte’s Jane Eyre.

This is a fascinating historical full-length novel that is set in mid-1929 and beyond, during the transition between the silent film era and the “talkies.” The main character, John Doyle, is a young man who has weathered a very difficult childhood, complete with parental abuse from which he extricated himself and his mother by beating his step-father to death and being sent to Canfield, a juvenile detention facility. This story is told in the first person so has biographical flavor. And throughout the narrative, John retreats from the daily grind of his life by reflecting on the experiences he had at Canfield, remembering the abuse he encountered there with the first superintendent, and then his learning and positive support he received from the second man who assumed that post. These reflections not only give him a mental “time away,” but also serve as a way of processing what is happening to him at Sloane Hall.

The other main character in this story is Pauline Sloane, stage name for a lovely but troubled movie star named Eleanor Brickman. She is popular with silent movie fans, attempting to make the transition to sound films, mercurial, beautiful, sassy, sexy, an alcoholic, troubled, and emotionally unstable. Her agent is her half-brother and is very good at what he does, but he also drinks too much and has wrapped Pauline in a web of Hollywood “spin” in order to make himself indispensible. However, Pauline (or Ellie as she asks John to call her) is drawn to John from the very first, giving him wide-eyed looks and fluttering lashes, simpering smiles and swaying hips, so that the poor guy is lost from the first. Slowly but surely they become involved sexually. John, however, can never come to peace with the fact that he is a servant and no matter how much he loves Ellie, he feels used by her. He wants to leave her employ numerous times, but can’t face living without being around her. His experiences with his alcoholic mother give him superior insight into the little lies alcoholics tell themselves and others in order to justify their drinking, and he would often simply refuse to be around her while she was drinking.

Ultimately, their personal relationship comes to a head but rather than moving forward as they both expected, Ellie’s half-brother interferes and the relationship is ruptured, seemingly for good. John leaves, broken-hearted and without a place to go, becomes a train-hopping bum, and after being beaten almost to death, arrives in Montana where he finds his mother’s cousins who take care of him and with whom he lives for nearly a year.

This is truly a Hollywood story–the flim flam of the movie industry, the parties and hard drinking and drug use, the competition between big stars, the “spin” that is woven around their joys and disasters. It is a heart-rending tale of two people who are, as Ellie often commented, ” . . . trying to be good . . .” and who are simply looking to be loved and at peace within themselves. It is a story of loss and gain, betrayal and forgiveness, kindness and cruelty. It embraces the best and the worst of the human spirit, and exposes the reader to authentic friendship, family dynamic–even the worst of families–and the artificiality of tinsle town.

Ms Sternberg has written a beautiful novel in that it is so well crafted, the narrative sufficiently descriptive to be helpful, introspective enough to give insight into John’s insecurities and triumphs, and helpful in understanding how his early experiences influence his decisions and choices. The plot is classic–struggle, achievement, conflict, and resolution. The story line begins in such a way that the reader has a full understanding of John’s roots and early experiences, his initial failures in Hollywood as an apprentice camera-man, his willingness to be a jack-of-all-trades for Ellie and her housekeeper, and his journey back from the lowest point in his life. The characters are enticing–they are each unique and I think are rather iconic as being representative of the kinds of people we all encounter, whether in such a context as Hollywood, or just Main Street, USA.

This is truly a love story, but it is Love, Rocky Road Style. It brings the reader into the bowels of the story and it did not let me go until the very end. My only criticism: I would have loved an Epilogue. But perhaps that is not in keeping with the author’s ending. In any event, it is an entertaining novel and contains much information about the realities of that era. While the author owns up to taking some liberties with the historical reality, I found that this was so limited as to be negligible. I think romance fans, especially those who enjoy the historical setting of the early 20th century, will find much to like in this novel.

I give it a rating of 4.5 out of 5.

This book is available from Five Star. You can buy it here.

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