Review: Hired: The Sheikh’s Secretary Mistress by Lucy Monroe

Posted September 26, 2008 by Holly in Reviews | 12 Comments

Review: Hired: The Sheikh’s Secretary Mistress by Lucy MonroeReviewer: Holly
Hired: The Sheikh's Secretary Mistress by Lucy Monroe
Series: Royal Brides #8
Published by Harlequin
Publication Date: August 1st 2008
Genres: Fiction, Romance, Contemporary, Contemporary Women, General
Pages: 192
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three-stars

Sheikh Amir bin Faruq al Zorha lives in New York, but the desert is where his heart lies. Now it's time for him to marry….
Grace Brown, Amir's plain but indispensable assistant, isn't exactly queen material. No matter how tempted Amir is to take her innocence, she's off-limits. Until he returns to his homeland, where the barbarian prince replaces the businessman—and resolves that Grace will be his!

 

I love Harlequin Presents novels and Lucy Monroe is generally my favorite HP author, but unfortunately my inner feminist decided this was the story she was going to stand up and rebel against. The characters were as expected: a somewhat limp heroine and an extremely controlling, alpha male. The story engaging, if a bit predictable. The writing as beautiful as always (I do so love LM’s writing style), but honestly the longer I read, the more frustrated I became. The more I wanted to scream, “Girl, make a stand! Walk away from his highhanded ways and stand on your own two feet. You’re a woman, ACT LIKE IT!” Sadly, she never did stand up and act like a woman, and therefore the story didn’t work for me.

Grace has been Amir’s personal assistant for five years, and during all that time she’s loved him. Amir has recently become attracted to his assistant, but he knows she’s completely innocent and wouldn’t be able to do a light affair. Then Amir’s father demands that he marry and Grace’s heart breaks. Only the wedding never happens, because the princess he was supposed to marry eloped with someone else. Then Amir asks Grace to find a wife for him, which she refuses to do, then agrees because she knows she can choose better than anyone else, because she knows him better than anyone. Of course, she doesn’t include herself because she’s tall and skinny and men don’t like that – not men like Amir, anyway.

I think there were just too many stereotypical things here to work for me.

  • She’s a secretary
  • She’s totally innocent at 25 – hasn’t ever even been kissed
  • She’s in love with her boss
  • He’s attracted to her but refuses to act on the attraction
  • She knows she isn’t good enough for him because she’s tall and skinny with a small chest

I think the worst thing, however, is that Grace totally lived for Amir. She had no life outside of him, no friends, no family close by, nothing. She lived and breathed Amir. That seemed more creepy than anything. For a 25 year old woman to have no one but her boss? The boss she happens to be in love with?

By the end of the story, I wasn’t invested enough in either of them to care one way or the other what happened.

3 out of 5

This book is available from Harlequin Presents. You can buy it here or here in e-format.

three-stars


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12 responses to “Review: Hired: The Sheikh’s Secretary Mistress by Lucy Monroe

  1. Willa, I bet you can, too. ha!

    Jen,
    No, I haven’t gotten past more than a couple chapters of that one. I’m actually having a similar issue with it.

    KB,
    Creepy, I’m telling you.

    Seneca,
    I adore LM. Absolutely adore her, but this just didn’t do it for me.

  2. Seneca

    She’s my #1 favourite author.
    But I agree.

    I tend to love cliche stories. Especially with the Harlequin Presents. This one wasn’t working for me, though.

  3. Oh, and I normally love Lucy’s HP’s for being outside the box! There was another one recently, the Rancher’s Virgin or something, that wasn’t up to her usual standards either. I love her books, and it’s sad to see that they are not like they used to be
    🙁

  4. I think I read that one also Stacy, and totally agree. I’m sure she’ll be back to her normal amazing self before long, though. I remember there being a couple misses awhile back for me, too, and she pulled out of it. 😉

  5. Seneca

    Tracy,
    Try to find ‘The Greeks Christmas baby.’

    (I know-that title!LOL)

    That books is my favourite of her presents books. I cried when I read it.
    It’s sooooo good.
    So is The Scorsolini Marriage Bargain, His ROyal Love Child, Bought: The Greek’s Bride.

    Actually, most of them all really good. There are a few dissapointments, but for the most part, you can’t go wrong with LM.

  6. Jessica/Tracy,
    The Scorsolini books are all pretty fabulous. I absolutely adore His Royal Love Child (OMG! The Title! LOL), but all of them are fabulous.

    Lucy Monroe really is the best of the HP authors, IMO, though there are some other great ones, like Penny Jordon.

    Daphne,
    Heh heh heh

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